Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. However, others believe that happiness has nothing to do with money. Do you agree or disagree.
Happiness play a crucial role in the life of every person. some masses think that income is a major aspect in attaining pleasure; while others tend to argue this view and feel that factors like spending time with family gives more gratification. I totally agree with the people that saying, money has nothing to do for person's happiness.
To commence with, it is true that,with the help of money, people buy anything which they want, even spend a comfortable and enjoyable life. For example, people who have more funds, they can travel worldwide and visit a wonderful places, wearing a expensive and fashionable cloths. So, without money, it would be very difficult to live a luxurious life and it is easy to see that why a person cannot be happy without money.
On the other hand, it is also true fact that, money cannot buy contentment. There are many rich person's, who have bags of money but are in sort of happy life. For example, a rich business man have spend more time for make hard cash. So, they have not much time to spend with their family members and children. As a result, family members are not happy with the lives, even they have money they needed.
To sum up, even through people can live relex life by having money, happiness does not rely on the money. To being a happiness, money has nothing to do and all depend on individual difference and their preference. Even if people have to create balance between them, then they can live comfortable and happy life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
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Suggestion: Some
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , with
...ss. To commence with, it is true that,with the help of money, people buy anything ...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'place'?
Suggestion: place
... travel worldwide and visit a wonderful places, wearing a expensive and fashionable cl...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e and visit a wonderful places, wearing a expensive and fashionable cloths. So, w...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
.... For example, a rich business man have spend more time for make hard cash. So, they ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while, for example, sort of, as a result, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66539923954 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33177520644 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562737642586 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3422153494 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6428571429 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304369553075 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119078129223 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756945507026 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206344515922 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436244576186 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.