Scientists predict that cars in the future will be controlled by computers and not be driven by computers. What are the reasons for this,Do you think this would be a good or bad idea.
The last few decades have seen enormous changes in the way of people's lives are affected by the advancement in technological fields such as computers and internet. Many scientists believe that cars in the future will control by computers due to the advance technology. This essay will discuss the reasons and offer some measure to takle this issue.
From an overall perspective, perhaps the most compelling reason why cars will be controlled by computers is because these days in the era of modernization every person busy in their personal life no one has extra time for outdoor activities. This mean that If any body who do not drive car, they can go from one place to another place without any driver.For example, Most of the people who live in Japan, they purchase automatic cars for saving their crucial time.
Despite these arguments, there are also a case for the idea that Fundamentally, If individuals buy fully automatic, people would not get employment as a driver. The result of this phenomenon might be that poverty will grow steadily and also crime rate will go up, like as robbery, theft and murder. The decision as to whether Masses should focus in order to purchase manual cars for saving their money must be seen in the context of the entire society.
To conclude, Although this is a topic which is very relevant to the contemporary society. However, I believe that cars control by computers is a bad idea because poverty will increase due to it.If government impose high taxes on automatic vehicles, less people will purchase it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93181818182 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60719452075 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1606293941 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.2 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360750313199 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128044839072 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575204939435 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20022269831 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240269353661 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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