Many students find it is harder to study at university or college compared to when they were in grade school. Why is this? What are some possible solutions for this problem?
Over the past decade, there is growing trends towards eschewing university courses in favor of other education program in grade school among college students. Although often debated, it is felt that long-term consequences of this alarming phenomenon will be felt at the social level. This essay will take a closer look at the negative ramifications before suggesting some feasible measures to reduce their feel harder when study at university.
The negligibly low level of student attendance in college education because they feel it is harder could be ascribed to a number reasons. Firstly, in order to pursue this highly demanding program, university students are required to have statistical skills and analytical abilities which often are presumably mastered by a few. In fact, there is plenty of scientific evidence proving that only rather minuscule share and presentation of the human population has a strong number sense, meaning that those without maths abilities would eventually feel it is harder and choose leave school after finishing high school. Secondly, in many countries, the tuition and fees paid to university programs are among the highest, thereby deterring college poorer from studying university. This perfectly explains the growing migration of Vietnamese don’t studying university to more developed their budget for better living and working conditions in recent times.
However, there are some viable remedies to solve or at lease alleviate the issue. Most politics, for instance, have proposed abolishing college fees and reduce homework. First, government subsidies for higher education are believed to equalize educated opportunities among young adolescents regardless of their family backgrounds. This financial support, presumably, tends not only to increase the overall college enrollment rate of lower-income people but also to mitigate their feeling of inferiority, which eventually promotes an egalitarian society in the long run. Moreover, reduce homework would make they feel better and relaxing. In fact, it is acknowledged that skilled and knowledgeable human capital is imperative to foster economic growth and technological developments in any nations.
In conclusion, despite the aforementioned problems deriving from the homework and financial, some solutions, namely the abolishing college fees and the ministry of education allows homework to be minimized, have been proven their feasibility. In the future, this beloved that feeling comfortable while studying would be a sustainable solution in the long run.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to leave'
Suggestion: to leave
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2181.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73947368421 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9154700091 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0912200229 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.3125 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291708519716 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083766952072 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469204826987 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169995827257 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566233449657 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 78.4519038076 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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