Many studies say that older people do not exercise enough. What are reasons for this and what would you suggest to encourage them to exercise?
It is argued that, as people become older they do less exercises than in one's youth. This essay will examine some of these causes in detail, and then propose some solutions.
On of the most causes, of elderlies is that, they feel themselvesalone and they need to some attention of children and other close people. It can influence to their activeness and they become less energetic. In addition to this, most elderlies hang up fiddle. It means they lose their aim and they feel themselves as insufficent to any work. Consequently they will suffer from depression and will not pay attention daily exercises. Furthermore, at the age from 40 to 55 people suffer from climacteric period. It occurs in both female and male and connected with hormonal changes in the organism. People who undergo this changes tend to be more passive. All factors mentioned below led elderlies to make less exercise.
Admittedly, all problems have own takle. Firstly, children and other member of family must pay attention and take care about their parents. It could give them inner strength. Secondly, despite their retirement government should provide themwith work or some activities. Moreover, they can do their hobbies during their rest of life. This in turn gives them self-satisfying feeling. They become more and more energetic and try to get into shape. Thirdly, all older inhabitants should always be under supervision of General Practitioners. Doctors have to regularly check-up their health and prescribe drugs according to their condition. Furhermore, physician should persuade older people, that doin daily exerciaes prevent a lot of deseases such as, obesity, myocardial infarction, angine pectoris, diabetus mellitus,atherosclerosis that mostly involved in elderlies.
In conclusion, althoughit is clear that older people do not enough exercises, it is undoubtedly possible tackle this issue. Both doctors and family of elderlies should pay more attention and take care about them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37741935484 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96280971633 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603225806452 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3409314161 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4782608696 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4782608696 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91304347826 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112982441805 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341710749479 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504735168017 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942129955496 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501942651589 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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