Many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and are using the internet to socialise with others. This has can lead to a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for children.
What problems do children face when going online without parental supervision?
How can these problems be solved?
It is thought by some that an increasing number of children use the internet for communicating and entertainment without parental supervision as a result they can face with situations that can treat their safety. Children can be cheated by cyber burglars and share them secret information but this can be tackled by using parental control programs on devices with the internet.
The main problem faced by children when they use the internet without supervision is that cyber burglars can steal important information that can affect financial welfare of an entire family. Nowadays, there are many different sources which are made especially for children, where they can watch cartoons or play different games. Furthermore, hackers use that websites and offer there games that can be played for free, but still they ask to fill the information blanks with parent’s personal information and credit card’s passwords. Hence, children provide that information in order to play those games and as a result, hackers use that information and steal money from parent’s bank accounts.
One effective solution to deal with cyber burglars and unsupervised access to the internet is to have the special programs which control access to the websites through asking a special passwords. For instance, many internet providers in my home city offer to people special function, which can ban access to potential danger websites. In additional, when children use the internet without special password, there is an operator who track the access to the internet. Another answer is to restrict access to children to the internet and allow to use it only under supervision, moreover, parents should encourage their children to play with peers without the internet as a result they will be in safe from such situations.
In conclusion, cyber burglars may steal passwords of credit cards and personal information through the internet when children use it, this can be solved by offering to parents to install special security programs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 212, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...f an entire family. Nowadays, there are many different sources which are made especially for c...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'password'?
Suggestion: password
...o the websites through asking a special passwords. For instance, many internet providers ...
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Line 3, column 541, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
...s to children to the internet and allow to use it only under supervision, moreover, pa...
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Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'parent'.
Suggestion: parent
...e it, this can be solved by offering to parents to install special security programs. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34375 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79926748231 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484375 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.3966896489 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.454545455 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0909090909 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44591607161 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202458965667 0.084324248473 240% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07253672172 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30182763485 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748925065287 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.