Many young people today choose or are forced to go work abroad. What are the advantage and disadvantage of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this modern era unemployment become a major concern. In addition to that nowadays many individual's are being pushed for working in a foreign country well there are many pros and cons of working and living in another country in comparison to own country. This essay will delve deeper into matter further and reach to a logical conclusion in the end.
To begin with, why multitudes are choosing to live another country because, there are many positive side of working and living in foreign country and it can be seen in many ways such as , they provide better job opportunity they provide marvelous lifestyle to live a good illustration of this in present time various nations like, Pakistan, Sri Lanka and many other are in a troublesome situation due to unemployment and they are not capable in providing a luxury lifestyle by dint of poor GDP therefore individual are in the search of superior job opportunity as well as to spend a comfy life. these are some reasons why individual prefer to live foreign instead of living in there raised place.
On the other hand, living in abroad have some loopholes also of working and living in foreign country such as, lack of support for instance in foreign if individual living for study purpose their are shortage of family along with relative support in case of any complicated situation it get quite hard to tackle alone. Moreover, many of individual are introvert type so they not able to social with citizens of country and they isolate themselves.
In conclusion, I reckon there are some drawbacks but if if person knows how to manages itself in the lifestyle of country then he will not regret.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for instance, i reckon, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80633802817 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59602651128 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542253521127 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.725488384 49.4020404114 335% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.625 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5 20.7667163134 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.5 7.06120827912 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300241476373 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120916358949 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106848939199 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1749022046 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766585540919 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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