Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past.
This modern era we live in has undoubtedly altered people’s lifestyle through countless ways. It is often argued that a lot of children are currently suffering from the low attention they receive compared to children in the old days. Personally, I strongly agree with this belief.
There are many examples how our lifestyle has changed in a way that created a distance between us and our offspring. Firstly, it is quite clear that recreational activities have become much more diverse and affordable than in the past. For instance, online games through modern gadgets have invaded our leisure time. These games have controlled not only youngsters but also adults, including many parents. Moreover, modern life requires parents to spend a remarkable amount of time in work so they can cope with the increasing living expenses. Therefore, more and more time had been deducted from the time which is supposed to be spent with our future leaders.
Undeniably, this development has led to a noticeable increase in children suffering in various aspects. For example, those busy parents no longer follow the academic achievement of their offspring. As a result, besides children’s poor achievement, they may grow with a deep feeling that schools are not a crucial stage in life. In addition, less attention and care for children may lead to prospective psychological disturbance. This is because children, in their critical ages, need to feel love and passion. Otherwise, they may be subjected to the lack of tenderness in the future.
In conclusion, it is obvious from what has been discussed above that modern lifestyle has brought lots of fathers and mothers away from their children. Consequently, the latter has become more likely to suffer academically and mentally than ever.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...er academically and mentally than ever.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26132404181 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87851275672 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623693379791 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4728103642 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.8235294118 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403950587147 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102149492561 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655874264435 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209887493154 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364588499267 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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