In the modern society, some people think that people are becoming more and more independent, while other people believe that they are more dependent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, many hold the view that people have a trend to be more independent. However, there is a body of opinion which claims that it’s not true. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the debate and give me opinion.
To begin with, it is undeniable that job opportunies make people tend to live alone. For example, many young generations from rural areas like poor countryside in China would rent an apartment in developed city because of the job and high salary given by the city and live alone. In addition, students could use the internet to do self-study owning to the development of science technology, using computers, smartphones and even robot to obtain knowledge instead of asking their teachers as an old way.
On the contrary, complicated workings lead to the fact that people tend to rely on others. As the working environment becomes more and more complicated, it’s impossible for a person to finish a work without someone else’s help in order that cooperation is obviously the best way for people to succeed and for campanies to make profits. It’s common to see huge successful companies own more that 10 thousands employees that are devided in different variety of departments, working together towards a same goal and depending on each others’ cooperation.
To summarise, there is no doubt that the working chances make people live by themselves and they can also learn by themselves without other’s help. At the same time, nevertheless, new working pattem makes it impossible for people to work on their own. In the final analysis, one can only conclude that people are becoming more and more dependent now.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'many holds'.
Suggestion: many holds
Nowadays, many hold the view that people have a trend to be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, for example, in addition, no doubt, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03985507246 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82006744658 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.425689399 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.916666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293289644765 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111949412213 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886034810169 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183808349422 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863706469116 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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