In the modern world it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the Internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is this a positive or negative development?
Never before did we witness a tremendous breakthrough in scientific development. Some people believe that thanks to the innovation of the Internet, it is no doubt that some stuffs such as trading online, working from distance or even indirectly interacting with others can be done easily. Also, their lifes may not be suffered much from not seeing each other for a long time. To be honest, I strongly agree that this is a huge evolution in the era of 4.0 due to these following reasons.
Firstly, the Internet can save a bunch of time and money. It is because the Internet is a worldwide network and it allows connection to all people around the worId. For example, in the past, it would take few weeks for people to send and receive a letter from someone who wanted to chat with. Moreover, stamps and delivering fees needed paying. However, in the present day, just only a click button and you can connect with anything on the Internet without any difficulties. By doing that, not only is it time-saving, but it is also money-saving.
The second reason is that this is a good opportunity for every single person to go shopping, make friends on a global scale. For instance, if you want to buy some stuffs online, there is only a way to use the Internet. Also, some applications such as Facebook or Instagram allow people to make new friends. Personally, I have such various international friends thanks to the Internet.
All in all, human beings benefit a lot from social network because of its convenience and connection between one and another.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
Never before did we witness a tremendous brea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77407407407 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71086064417 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618518518519 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2383884307 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0714285714 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142312353703 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421661456109 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455360913307 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735393568882 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508268586553 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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