Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, and a permanent job is more important. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
Throughout history, there has always been a controversial topic related to career. Some people give opinion that passion and enthusiasm in work are more necessary, compared to stable jobs. Others think that a life-long career is the best way because sometimes jobs are unexpectable. While I agree that job’s joyfulness is crucial, I strongly believe that permanence is the key factor.
On the one hand, it will be more productive if favourite jobs are chosen. Once workers have interest in their job, they will work effectively and the products are going to be much more better. For example, someone who is an extrovert person can not stand working in a building for a whole day although the salary is high, just simply because of its boredom and . Instead, some adventure jobs such as tour guide, photographer, engineer seem to be more suitable for people who want to challenge themselves.
On the other side, the role of a life-long job is very crucial. Above all, money is one of the most necessary things that all people look for in their life. When people are young, they look for fun, entertainment, but when getting married and having children, a stable job is their first priority. By doing that, not only do they have more experiece, but they also receive a pay rise.
All in all, although job satisfaction may bring comfort to employees, I strongly believe that a stable job can give people a lot of benefits, especially in terms of experiece in work and salary.
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- Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction and a permanent job is more important Discuss both view and give your own opinion 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, thus, while, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82283464567 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66775064474 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614173228346 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.246341308 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2307692308 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342603696304 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121470807302 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681279483826 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211035330741 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404512432121 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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