More and more city workers are deciding to live in the country and travel into work every day. The result is increased traffic congestion and damage to the environment. What measures do you think could be taken to encourage people not to travel such long

It is happening in some cities that people are choosing to live far from city centers where their workplaces are located, therefore, they are required to travel a longer distance to work day by day. This, in turn, creates some serious issues such as traffic jam and pollution. The aim of this essay is to provide some solutions to these severe problems.
In order to provide effective solutions, one needs to discover the underlying reasons for the problem. Two main reasons are behind the rise of people’s decision of living in the countryside rather than in the urban. First and foremost, the cost of living in the city which includes room rent and living cost is usually much higher than that in the countryside. In order to encourage people to settle in the city, several measures can be taken by responsible authorities. Firstly, the rent expense in cities should be supported or lower than before. Secondly, the city authorities also can attract people by constructing a number of facilities such as gym, school, mall center, and park.
The second reason is that people would like to enjoy their life in a peaceful area which avoiding pollution in big cities. To tackle this concern, the government should make an attempt to effectively solve both air and noise pollution, more funding should be allocated to studying this aspect. In doing so, people may be more willing to live in big cities.
Another good idea to reduce the number of people travel the long distance to work is to encourage some business to reallocate and move their office to the countryside. By this way, many people will be more satisfied with both their life and job.
To conclude, although the issues of traffic congestion and pollution are increasingly serious resulting from people living far from the city, these problems also can be remedied by some suitable measures indicated above.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome solutions to these severe problems. In order to provide effective solutions,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94936708861 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59981788523 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541139240506 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7342367958 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.266666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277609748919 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857677741721 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607577797723 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14645039354 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160472308786 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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