It is irrefutable that the technology has been developed over the years and thus, several organisations allow their employees to work from home and also makes the working hours flexible for the conveniency to the employees rather than visiting to the workplace every day. In my opinion, the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages.
Firstly, one of the noticeable advantage is the time-saving. Nowadays, due to the fact that traffic congestionhas inclined drastically from the past few years and hence, arriving to the office on time sometime Is not possible which can leads to penalty (late mark) and to avoid these penalties and also the wastage of time, companies have provided the other alternatives (work from home) to the workers. Secondly, flexibility in working hours can make the employee more fascinating towards their work. However, he/she can work in their suitable time. For instance, as per the recent survey, due to this global pandemic (Covid-19), 80% of firms allowed their jobholders for remote working. Thirdly, many organisations does not provide the pickup and drop facilities to their workers and therefore, employees can avoid travelling expenses by choosing the option of working from home. Moreover, considering all these merits, a plethora of companies allowed their workers to perform their job from house itself.
On the other hand, there few drawbacks such as poor network connection and lack of face to face interaction. Many a times, an employee might face poor connection issues or shortage of electricity at home which leads to disturbance in the work process. Further, many of the successful firms often prefer for face to face interaction while singing the contracts or agreements which obviously not possible through working from home. For example, a presenter may face difficulty for presenting the presentation due to lack of network connection.
To conclude, although, there are some demerits for working remotely, in the contrast, there are several advantages as well which can be beneficial in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85762511568 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563076923077 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7876491954 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7857142857 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289090282783 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939678405924 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636920465558 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159063400018 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099300063578 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.