More and more people are choosing to eat healthy food and making time to exercise regularly. Why and what can we do to encourage this?
From this day and age, there is an increasing number of people in our society who consume healthy products and spend more spare time working out. There are many reasons contributing to this trend and actions to encourage others to do the same.
Firstly, food that consists of a high rate of fiber and protein seems attractive to users due to people’s awareness of their own appearance beauty. These kinds of products are the key to an ideal body shape and smooth skin. Therefore, people can be more confident in every social event and discussion. In addition, exercise plays an important role in the process of reducing extra calories and producing more muscles as well as removing body toxic. It means that people not only increase their strength but also avoid such diseases as high blood pressure or heart attack.
In order to encourage people to have a healthy diet and sporty spirits, the government can take some actions. Initially, people should be imparted more about the advantage of a healthy lifestyle at any communicational forms. These can be social media, television news, or newspapers. Moreover, companies should reduce the amount of workload, so that their employees would have more opportunities to take care of themselves.
To sum up, the reasons why people make a choice to live healthily are improving their appearance and saving budget as they are not likely in need of medical treatments. The government can give people some encouragement by putting more information on the Internet about the benefits of low-fat products and doing exercise. Additionally, people should be given less time at work to have a better condition to pay attention to their health.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05017921147 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73033599606 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616487455197 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9038734773 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319296251831 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983353193512 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587447046008 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188319290582 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300133736217 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.