More and more people are choosing to eat healthy food and making time to exercise regularly. Why and what can we do to encourage this?
Recently, the majority has placed tremendous concern on adapting habits of eating fresh food and taking part in routine exercises. This essay attempts to elaborate on factors leading to such a trend and methods towards stronger encouragement of this living style.
To commence with, the emergence of this newly popularized trend can be ascribed to a more advanced understanding of people. Particularly, with the far-reaching endorsement of mass media, content relating to personal health and lifestyle is approaching a wider range of viewers than ever before. As a matter of fact, the average awareness on how to lead a healthy life has risen drastically, resulting in an escalation in the number of people changing their daily routines in search of a fresher and more balanced life.
Such a promising scenario could be maintained if definite encouragements are taken into account. Simply speaking, in order to raise people’s awareness about the positive impact of a healthy life, more related projects as well as lectures should be provided within educational milieus. By this, I mean health-related knowledge, if provided at school, would act as a prelude to guarantee juveniles of a future in which their daily diet and exercise routine is among their greatest concerns. If more programs focusing on people’s health are supplied in the early stages of people’s lives, the community would be assured of its dwellers’ strong resistance to fatigue.
In light of the aforementioned discussion, media support is responsible for the conspicuous lifestyle betterment in people and more could be done from educational institutions to raise awareness of teenagers about how to lead a physically and mentally balanced life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, i mean, as a matter of fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38376383764 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09981110002 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619926199262 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2844803158 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.9 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209136807675 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765706688016 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394099650584 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115615063664 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290503820883 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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