More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
It is true that looking for a job is the main reason for urban migration. Living in cities is not easy as it appears to be. In cities there is a variety of challenges that could face people. These challenges require governmental measures to be tackled.
The complicated life in cities has led to certain problems. Firstly, air pollution is the most critical one. People in cities suffer from heart and lung diseases because of the air pollutants. Carbon dioxide emission that comes from vehicles and factories is the main reason. Secondly, traffic jams are another problem. People could waste their time waiting in the rash hours, while returning home or going to work. Crowdedness in streets makes it difficult for children as well as the elderly to move. Thirdly, unemployment is another issue. People are increasing in number while the jobs do not. Moreover, automated machines replaced people. For example, many cars do not need drivers as they have a self-drive option. Cashiers are nowadays electronically-programmed without the need of humans. Lastly, crime rates are higher in cities, compared to villages. Shoplifters and pickpockets are very active in crowded places.
The difficulties mentioned above deserve some efforts from the authorities to solve. The air pollution needs some regulations to strict the production of the harmful gases from factories. Manufacture companies should be obliged to pay more tax to fix the environmental damage they did. The cost of the public transportation should be decreased to encourage people to leave their cars so the pollution and the traffic congestion could be less. The crowded places that attract people like shopping malls should be moved outside the cities. Governmental services should be computerized so that less number of people would visit their facilities. Admission criteria to schools and colleges should be simpler to accept higher number of applicants. Instead of being unemployed, people could get some training or degrees that qualify them for work. Lastly, criminals should be punished in a rehabilitative way. They should serve in the community or learn beneficial courses in prison.
In conclusion, urban life has many problems related to the many aspects; the environment, the job market and the safety, so measures should be taken by the government to resolve these complexities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a rehabilitative way" with adverb for "rehabilitative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.296 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98025025049 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570666666667 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7116178222 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4827586207 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9310344828 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202493270884 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464690893196 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493012834843 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122046049281 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018961633582 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.57 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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