More and more people are moving away from an agriculture background to relocate in cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?
It is certainly true that many masses are migrating toward suburbs for making their life better instead to engage in agricultural farms. However, this trend will give birth to the problems namely congestion and competition which can be address by increasing job opportunities in countryside.
To begin with, population is escalating in urban areas day by day to take the benefit of certain facilities, such as providing higher education to their children as well finding high paid jobs. In this way, traffic congestion would increase as everyone use their own vehicles to go from one place to another. Moreover, the competition would be stiff as the innumerable people would appear in competitive exams to get high rank jobs. To illustrate, In india, more people are relocating to urban cities from rural areas for finding jobs according to their eligibility but all are not getting it due to non clearance of job tests.
To tackle these problems, the administration should set up schools and colleges near to countryside where the people of small towns can send their children to take education. Furthermore, the job opportunities could be raise by establishing factories and industries close to the villages so that everyone can get well paid jobs and do not feel to shift in cities.
In conclusion, the issues raising in cities such as congestion and competition could be resolved by providing high wage jobs to the countryside people as well by opening reputed and prestigious colleges in small villages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, as for, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13765182186 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9239123146 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.4512538072 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.0 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145688578875 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598344895223 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403781000956 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849648744549 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247990489332 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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