Some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food. Others, however, think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People differs in their opinion whether the government is responsible to improve the public health by implementing rules with regard to nutrient rich food or folks are responsible itself for keeping their body fit and healthy. In this essay, I shall discuss that both the administration and individuals are responsible for the maintenance of their health.
To begin with, many mortals argued that the regime can improve public health by imposing certain laws that only those food should be imported or exported that are rich in minerals and nutrients. Because the masses but food products from the market which is proven to be jeopardise for human health and causing several diseases. Moreover, the government should encourage the people that use only biological fertilizers to increase the yield of crops and not chemical manures. A scientific study reveals that the use of DDT is banned ten years ago as it decreases the amount of nutrients in food.
On the other hand, some persons asserted that it is the self responsiblity of themselves to improve their health conditions by eating fruits and green vegetables grown in their kitchen garden by using compost made from vegetable waste and animal dung. Furthermore, they should avoid to take prepackaged dishes from restaurants which is lesson in nutrients, vitamins and minerals. Also, if they feel that they are gaining excess weight than they should engage themselves in exercises and yoga and the metabolism rate increases.To illustrate, the well beings are doing exercises regularly to improve their health.
In conclusion, my personal perspective is that the humanity is much responsible to keep up their health as the government can only impose the laws that how the quality of grains could be improve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'those foods'?
Suggestion: this food; those foods
...alth by imposing certain laws that only those food should be imported or exported that are...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid taking'.
Suggestion: avoid taking
...d animal dung. Furthermore, they should avoid to take prepackaged dishes from restaurants whi...
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Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
... yoga and the metabolism rate increases.To illustrate, the well beings are doing e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, to begin with, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22105263158 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74825331361 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5530230374 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.8 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23816644233 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913752299461 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558397813718 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146648357431 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374213467008 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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