Some people think money is the best gift to give to youngsters, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that exchange of gifts show the feeling toward each other. Many people believe to give money as a present which bring happiness in the life of their children. Nevertheless, other mortals argue that money has negative impact on the life of youth so it is not the best gift.
To begin with, money plays a beneficial role in the life of youngsters as they have numerous needs to fulfill. Therefore, the parents of teenagers give money as a precious gift instead of giving anything else to them. As the younger are school going students and they have take their academics things such as pen, notebook and books at any time which is possible only if they have sufficient money. To illustrate, my parents often give me coins as a gift and I use that for buying my useful items such as clothes and laptop. In this way, the youngsters would also learn about the value of money and its management.
On the downside, some people are not agree to give currency to the adolescents as it has some drawbacks. Like, if the loungerhave enough money, they would prefer to go in restaurants for tasting junk food which may cause health issues such as obesity. Moreover, the children would join bad companies who have addiction of drugs and spoil their valuable life. And, they would also become burglar if they do not have enough money. Consequently, they will lose their standard in the society and the name of their parents.
In conclusion, my personal prospective is that where it is good to give money as a gift to their son and daughter is helpful for family to teach money management skills but its cons could not be overlooked by which the reputation of parents decreases in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66220735786 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48358780986 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56856187291 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3954796337 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22184145376 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086218298226 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756744407431 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148560901432 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520582930724 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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