More and more people claim that modern work patterns are a source of stress. What do you think are the cause of this? Can you suggest some possible solution?
A significantly large number of people are of the opinion that work causes an overwhelming amount of pressure, which can take its toll on person’s health and put risk on their mental wellness. Nevertheless, work alone does not lead to anxiety, as there are multiple factors which can lead to stress. This essay will discuss both causes for nervousness and solutions towards its prevention.
First of all, the reasons for a person to feel stressed include external factors, which put high demands on people. Although we are inclined to think that such factors are adverse, for example, exhausting work schedule or rocky relationship, those determinants also include favorable events, such as marriage proposal, getting accepted into college or receiving a promotion. However, not all tension is caused by external factors. There are also internal or self-generated factors, when you worry excessively about something that may not happen or have a pessimistic point of view about certain situations. To elaborate, stress partially depends on person's perception of it, meaning that something that seems stressful for one human being may not faze another one. To put in a perspective, concerning the current situation with the pandemic, some people may find it distressing to be put into a quarantine, while others may enjoy it, as they take pleasure from spending time alone or would like to communicate with their relatives more.
Regarding ways of coping with stress, there are several ways for an individual to avoid it in their everyday life. Firstly, improving the ability to handle it is beneficial in order to contend with tension. The simple act of communicating with others face-to-face can help people to relieve stress when they are feeling agitated. Mediation and relaxing can also alleviate the feeling of anxiety and help to control the receiving amount of stress. Thus, meditating, reading and listening to music can reduce person's everyday stress levels.
To conclude, there are several determinants for a human being to feel physical or mental pressure, which include external and internal factors, and that can be dealt with a number of ways, such as improving your stress threshold and meditating.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 650, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, thus, well, while, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28531073446 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82574138753 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1540396974 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.733333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169211860653 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542396391825 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265655883639 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975563150352 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405499661426 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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