More and more people want to buy clothes, cars and other items with famous brands. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In the present ages, buying clothes, cars and other items with well-known brands become more and more with many people. there are some underlying reasons for this trend and in my opinion, it may come with negative development
In the present ages, buying clothes, cars and other items with well-known brands become more and more with many people. there are some underlying reasons for this trend and in my opinion, it may come with negative development
there are two main reasons for this issue. Firstly, owning items from famous brands is usually the way for people to show with others about their wealth. For example, some adults in China who come from a wealthy family, usually buy many clothes or bags from well-known brands like channel, dior and LV and post it on a social network. As a result, they receive many admiration and attraction from netizens. Secondly, most high-priced products have good quality and people tend to spend a considerable amount of money for these goods. As my mother for an example, about 4 years ago she ready spent nearby 3000 dollars to buy a bag from channel brand and now this bag still looks like a new item.
spending money for items with well-known brands also has some disadvantages. To begin with, items with famous brands can make people waste too much money because these products usually have high-priced. If people want to own a bag or a perfume from dior, they need spend at least 300 or 400 dollars which can be used for meaningful thing such as a charity. In addition, buying too much expensive items can make a negative effect on people. this is because using items from famous brands at public places can attract the attention of criminals and people might meet robbers or even abductors.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why more and more people like buying items such as shoes or clothes from famous brands and I think it to be a negative development overall for the above-mentioned arguments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, at least, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81952662722 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43583854308 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476331360947 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7506551754 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.357142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396699932539 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156261924241 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122495683859 0.0667982634062 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30124587449 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109223238332 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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