More and more young people are using drugs and alcohol and as a result, breaking the law.
What are the causes of this problem?
What are some possible solutions
These days the young generation is more prone to bad habits such as alcohol and drugs, and these things can result in breaking the law. The main cause of this problem is that these days the media influences young people to use drugs and alcohol, resulting in law violation. some solutions to this issue could be to conduct some seminars at school about the bad side effects of drugs and alcohol, another solution might be to make some strict rules against drugs and alcohol.
One of the main causes of alcohol and drug abuse in young people is media. Many alcohol brands are being advertised through the media. Almost in every movie or in Tv-show we can see people who want to get through their problems by using drugs or alcohol. However, some may say that there are also shown the negative aspects of these bad habits through the media, but I think that the media is still doing some damage.
Holding some seminars at school about healthy lifestyle can have a positive impact on children. During those seminars students can be introduced to the unwanted side effects of drugs and alcohol on their health. Also, some former drug and alcohol abusers can talk about their experience, how they get into that problems, and how they overcome.
Another solution to this problem can be done by government. it can create strict new rules against the usage of alcohol and drugs. some studies prove that there is evidence that these rules can lead to less alcohol and drug use, also decrease the number of breaking the law.
In conclusion, it was shown that the main cause of alcohol and drug overdose is promoted through the media, and some actions can be done by doing open seminars with school children and by making more strict rules.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77631578947 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15394977976 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483552631579 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6822192257 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342998971452 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136508988116 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933117963519 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20677013813 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113984576418 0.056905535591 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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