Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
these days the world is changing at a rapid speed. However, some believe that we still have the same standardized choices that we had before, since a little has changed. And there may be some merit in this view. Yet, in what follows it will be argued that nowadays we have a huge amount of choices, as the shopping industry is offering us more and there is a variety of options in the job market as well.
it’s not a secret that the shopping industry has developed over the times and allows us to have way too many choices. Every day new shopping centers are being opened such as malls, supermarkets, etc. For instance, during my childhood we had only one small market for food and another one for clothes in our neighborhood, which left us with little choices. In contrast, now we have plenty of malls, supermarkets, etc near us. another thing that made a difference in this area was, when online shopping sites came out, enabling the customers to do the shopping at home. Thus, it is evident that due to the development of the trade culture we have too many alternatives.
A while ago people had a few options, when it came to choosing a profession. The job market needed only some regular jobs. these days we have so many specialties, that we would have never imagined in the past. The universities are opening so different faculties. Therefore, having a huge amount of opportunities to find work is another proof that nowadays we are left with a lot of choices.
In conclusion, it was demonstrated that these days we have plenty of choices, as the trade market is expanding at a high speed, and new specialties are coming out. Though some people don’t notice these changes, still, we can’t argue that nowadays we have more options.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, another thing, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73462783172 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65224917707 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537216828479 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6338175571 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0588235294 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306373339174 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946940801413 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635589910647 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19689424354 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211154348902 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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