The bar chart below shows the percentages of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activities in 2010.
The bar chart above illustrates the proportion of males and females in six age groups who did physical exercises on regular bases in australia, in 2010.
Overall, women in age groups from 25 were more active, in contrast, a higher number of men from 15 to 24 were engaged in physical activity. The most active females were from 45 to 54 age group, whereas the least active were from 65 and over. For males, the highest number was noted among 15 to 24 years old and the lowest between 35 and 44.
In 2010, more Australian women, older than 25, spent time on doing physical exercises than men did. The percent of active females and males fluctuated from 47.1% to 53.3% and 39.5-52.8, respectively. 52.8% of males from 15 and 25 years old did physical activity, compared with 47.7% of females from the same age group.
In australia, the most active age group among females was between 45 and 54, 53.3% of them was engaged in physical activity. While 47.1% of women from 65 and over was active, which was the least. 52.8% from 15 to 24 years old men did physical exercises, compared with 39.5% among 35 to 44 age group males, these were the highest and lowest picks in male generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72300469484 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3104030048 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460093896714 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.172504326 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282216015251 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12867413124 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949706839559 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214382256419 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816007638479 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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