At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, the population of some countries mainly consists of young generation. some believe that this is a major issue, as elderly people can contribute more to their country based on their past experience. And there may be some merit in this view. Yet, in what follows it will be argued that having a huge number of young adults is more advantageous, since this is beneficial for the nation’s demography and young persons have more energy.
having more young people in the country, can play a significant role in that country's demography, since this will secure an increasing number of inhabitants in the future. These days, one of the main problems for some country’s government is the aging population. For instance, in our country the elder people outnumber young generation. Therefore, it is obvious that later we are going to face lots of economic and social obstacles.
Another positive aspect of youth is that young ones are full of energy, as they are more eager to learn and experience new things. young adults can put all their energy into their work in order to come up with creative and innovative ideas. As a result of this, the notion might benefit economically. Hence, youngsters can have serious input in the country’s development, since they are able to bring fresh air into the industry.
According to some, one of the drawbacks of decline in the number of older people is that they might have less impact on the country. it is hard to deny that senior citizens have their unique part in our society. Moreover, they can pass their experience to younger generation.
In conclusion, it was shown that the country can gain more, when it has more young people, as the future population will tend to grow and young ones are full of enthusiasm. Though, some say that there are some disadvantages to be considered, still, the advantages greatly outweigh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0534591195 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75084626539 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534591194969 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.015568049 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5294117647 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221891452633 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741260166556 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541601414182 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131893894523 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557856546252 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.