In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
What is the cause?
What can be done about this problem?
even though the world is facing agricultural development, there are still hungry people around the world. One of the main causes of the high number of starving people is economic inequality within the population. this essay will suggest a few solutions to this issue such as providing the poor people with least necessary food supplies and organizing more fundraisers for hungry people.
The fact that a huge number of people still go hungry is the result of the increasing gap between the wealthy people and the poor people. In both urban and rural areas we can meet people who have a luxurious life without knowing the value of money. In contrast, we also meet people from a poor background, who don’t even have the minimum living conditions, including food. Regardless of any action done to minimize this gap, nowadays, the uneven distribution of resources is still actual.
The growing number of hungry people might be declined by giving them at least the minimum amount of food in order to survive. Therefore, the government ought to take responsibility for hunger problems. this can be solved by enforcing some laws to open free eating centers for targeted people. For instance, in our neighborhood we have a cafeteria, which provides free food for senior citizens who live alone.
hungry people should not only be the government’s concern, individuals can play a significant role as well. people can team up with their friends and raise some money for needy people by doing various kinds of charity work. These types of events, besides helping poor people, will also be beneficial for our society.
In conclusion, it was demonstrated that the gap between wealth and poverty can result in the presence of starving people in even agriculturally advanced countries. However, this issue can be successfully dealt with by the help of the authorities and some dedicated individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, at least, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21864951768 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80109527841 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578778135048 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.1666576868 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.4375 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209985321688 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728776384123 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447710635341 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122605840416 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331232322648 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.