Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
These days the right of confidentiality is one of the priorities. According to some, there is a certain type of data that should not be shared with the public, as this might violate some individual’s rights and put some companies at risk. And there may be some merit in this view. Yet, in what follows it will be argued that sharing academic, scientific and business information can be beneficial to new discoveries and the upcoming generation will be more educated.
it is hard to deny that making discoveries in both scientific and business field will be difficult if you don’t have proper data at hand. there is a huge number of discoveries, that we can’t imagine our lives without them, and most of them were made step by step, based on the previous information that was shared. For instance, treatments for u number of diseases were found due to the exchange of medical research data. Another positive aspect can be noted in the academic area. Plenty of students can’t afford themselves to get proper education. Therefore, the community will have more knowledgeable people if the most part of the academic materials were shared freely.
On the other hand, some say that not all the information should be shared freely as this can be a threat to a few individuals and business companies as well. there is a kind of data that should only be provided to the targeted group such as incomes and profits, medical information and academic improvement. Moreover, exchanging too much information might be harmful to some business centres, since it is obvious that, currently, there are big competitions in the business world. Thus, there are some aspects that should be taken into consideration before sharing information.
In conclusion, it was shown that exchanging scientific, business and academic information is essential for discovering new things and having more literate people. Though, some may argue that some data should not be shared, since this might damage other’s privacy, still, the advantages of sharing information outweighs it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24629080119 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94535461489 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537091988131 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0006233336 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34616965257 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114065025259 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724915956312 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224286339415 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732552596591 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.