More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent years, people are choosing to have a baby later on in their life which is contrary to traditional ways. In this essay I will discuss the reasons for such stance. Moreover, I support the view that people should give to children at an early age.
Firstly, times have changed and people are immersed in their jobs and this would leave room for people to take care of infants. Moreover, there is a fear of not being economically stable to fulfill the incumbent and indispensable aspects required to bring up a child. This might be one of the reasons for postponing or having children at a later age than erstwhile. For instance, in earlier days people had less work pressure and were able to dedicate significant time to nurture their child.
However, although there are certain benefits of the former view. I would argue that people should not delay having children too much. As, children born to older people might have health problems or maybe be born prematurely and in some cases, people struggle with not being able to have children and pay continuous visits to IVF centers. In addition to that, the lifespan of people has drastically reduced since the past years. So, parents might not be present during the times when their child needs them the most. Furthermore, older parents in turn would need a helping hand from their children and would not be able to play a predominant role in their life, and the lack of parent causes psychological issues in children, for example, playing a sport with them as their old age would not allow them to do so. This, could steal childhood from children and could be deleterious to the child's growth as a whole.
In conclusion, although there are certain advantages of having children at an older age. People should focus on aspects that are beneficial to the child and themselves and not postpone having a child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47968425797 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6102204474 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258083660001 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917181403263 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575932118057 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173861503179 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320402223579 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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