The more a product is advertised, the more people want to buy it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many believe as much as a product appears in advertisements, people would like to buy that product more than other ones. In my opinion, advertising plays a significant role in the number of attentions that a product receives. In other words, the more a product absorbs public attention, the more it is sold in the market. Therefore, as advertising is the best way to make people familiar with a product and its advantages, it can be said advertising is the best way to increase the number of sales regarding a particular product. In this essay, we examine different aspects of advertising concerning a product's sales.
Making a new product is always a big challenge for the manufacturers. When a new product comes out of a production plant, its journey towards the customer's houses is started. First of all, people must accept that a particular product is useful and they can apply it in their activities. On the other hand, consumers must feel it is a response to a need. Second, users must trust that product. They must accept the product is produced with good quality, it can last for a reasonable period, and in the end, they must make sure it has enough supports from the producer for future updates or services.
Convincing the consumers that a particular product can fulfill their criteria, cannot be provided except if it is advertised sufficiently. Therefore, almost all companies try to advertise their products in an appropriate way to show their useful features and make a connection in the mind of consumers between that special product and a need in the real world. It has been reported in several individual papers that advertising can have a direct effect on the number of sales for products.
To sum up, advertising a product is the right way to absorbing consumer's attention to a particular product and rise the number of sales.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: consumers'; consumer's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, first of all, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85443037975 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88571505627 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493670886076 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7242260025 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.266666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23462237611 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916213297222 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655422455184 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150161938785 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905172974467 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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