Most of big cities are overpopulated. Why do people still move to big cities? Give your opinion and example.
Several big cities are highly populated. Even then a large number of people prefer living in the cities. In my opinion, it has to do with the environment and opportunities that the city offers.
Foremost, it is not an obscure fact that the cities have a lot more to offer than the countryside. The cities offer enormous opportunities for an individual to indulge in. Finding work easily in the cities is the biggest reason that leads to the migration of people to the cities. For instance, the job sector in cities is vast. Several jobs namely valet; drivers, corporate jobs, etc. are the kind of jobs that only exists in the cities. There are more job opportunities in the cities that act as a magnet and attract people to come to live in the city rather than the countryside where the jobs are limited.
Secondly, education in cities is much more creative. New teaching methods have been introduced over the past years to make learning more fun for the students. Many parents relocate to cities for better education of their children. The schools in the cities are more practical and have better resources which play a vital part in the studies. For example, the smart classes which were introduced a few years ago have yet not reached the remote areas. These classes offer new learning techniques and unorthodox methods of learning. This attracts many people to move to cities so that they can give the best education to their children.
Furthermore, lifestyle in the cities is also a contributing cause to the attraction towards the cities. The city environment is completely different from the small towns. The number of leisure activities in the cities such as golfing, clubbing, swimming etc. are the kind of luxuries that people come looking for in the cities. No doubt the luxurious lifestyle of the cities is an alluring factor for the preference of living in the cities than in the countryside.
Concluding, the population in the cities may be high but it is worth the features that cities have to offer. Jobs, lifestyle, pleasures, better education etc. are the reasons for the large amount of immigration of people to the cities. The population is in the cities is overlooked due to the large scope that city life offers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... cities are highly populated. Even then a large number of people prefer living in the cities. In ...
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Line 5, column 635, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e the best education to their children. Furthermore, lifestyle in the cities is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84895833333 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63446823967 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458333333333 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5205524635 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.6153846154 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297736312148 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888879437755 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666625930546 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187449407375 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498555408532 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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