The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Income is one of the important factors when people looking for jobs. Some people reckon that it is the most vital condition on their career pathway. Is high income is the first priority when people seeking for jobs? In this essay, I will offer my opinion and given supporting examples and reason why high income is the first condition when people choosing their jobs.
First of all, a high income means people have more freedom on their finances. It allows people not be confined by money, while being more delight due to the low financial pressure. For example, one of my friend who is born in a quite affluent family, and she don’t need to worry about the prices when she do shopping. Thus, everytime I meet her, she always has a big smile on her face because she doesn’t need to worry about money, she can do whatever she wants. So that reflects a high income does bring happiness to people and given a certain freedom on their finances.
Secondly, a high income can provide a wealth to people’s next generation. On the other word, it can provide many kind of ‘’wealth’’ for your kids. For instances, you can hire a many teachers to allows your children to acquire many skills, so that is kind of ‘’wealth’’ in my opinion. Meanwhile, people also can use their high income to provide their children a better education. Such as hire a tutor to improve children’s academic performances, send their children to private schools, and allows them to study abroad.
To conclude, I reckon that a high income is the first priority when people are acquiring jobs. That is because in my poin of view, people can reaps the benefits from a high income. For example, a high income can provide more financial freedom for people while it also can be a legacy for people’s next generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'doesn’t'.
Suggestion: doesn’t
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'doesn’t'.
Suggestion: doesn’t
...has a big smile on her face because she don’t need to worry money, she can do whateve...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'certain freedom'.
Suggestion: certain freedom
...oes bring happiness to people and given a certain freedom on their finances. Secondly, a high in...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...tion. On the other word, it can provide many kind of ‘’wealth’’ for your kids. For instan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72607260726 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63867526456 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475247524752 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4433394179 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173328416087 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743857528683 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563563796305 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116757638704 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607261209279 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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