Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory, job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Personally, I agree with it. To accept a bad situation I suppose it doesn't mean equal to fail, by contrast, it's a precious opportunity to let us to improve ourself while dealing with the problem.
Everyone has their own "bad situation" after all, some of them could be a bad result of their homework, fail the exam, or lose their jobs. Although it does not sound quite good for our lives, this is a great chance to find our disadvantages to change them. For example, last year, I got 50% on my math first test in school, but I didn't give up on the course. Instead of being overwhelmed by the sad emotions, I tried my best to look at how I can improve my performance at math. So I decided to stay in the school every weekday until I finished the daily homework and the exercises that my math teacher gave us, while it also provided a chance to let me ask my math teacher about my weakness and how to overcome it. The effort didn't waste, through the days when I stayed in the math classroom after school, the teacher recognized me, gave me a good remark, and helped me so I could rebuild my confidence at math, finally I got 73% for the final mark. Although it wasn't a very high mark, it showed my sweat and effort in it. Through this process, I built up my confidence not only in math but also in speaking English. That is because I came to Canada last September, and at that moment my English wasn't very good, even sometimes I didn't understand the questions, so 73% to me is a satisfactory mark.
On the other hand, some people may not have a chance to change their ''bad situations''. For example, people are dissatisfied with their current jobs because they weren’t their first choice. They were rejected by their desired companies due to their educational qualifications. That is because of their educational background not qualified to accept by some big companies, so they have to do some activity to improve their profile. While, some people would accept the job which they aren't unsatisfactory, due to their finance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, so, while, after all, even so, for example, i suppose, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 24.0651302605 270% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55858310627 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67564942626 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528610354223 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2820890976 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110855478998 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416939795021 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402318530307 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788384693093 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178452948457 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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