The most important priority for any government is to provide its people with housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that providing accommodation for inhabitants is considered to be the most highly important task for any government.I,However,completely disagree with the given statement on the basis of different priorities in any society and the emergence of economic recision in the society.
To begin with,the main reason is that the priorities of each society are different.That is to say,the priority of any society is determined by its own social conditions, such as poverty,educational attainment,unemployment and so on.For instance, developed countries which do not have financial problems and all people have homes try to Think of more important issues than providing house to citizens.These issues including food security,nuclear weapons,and air pollution.
Supplementary to this,providing housing to people may cause the society to decline economically. This is the fact that people work because they want to afford to meet their fundamental needs,the most important of which is accommodation.This being the case, If people have their own house,they will no longer thrive to work to pay for housing.This causes ,for instance,reduction of workforce in the factories which produce different goods by selling them the society could make money.Therefore, the society may experience economic recession as such factories may be closed in the absence of workforce.
To conclude,in the light of the above-mentioned analysis,concerning the question of whether government should prioritize providing shelter for citizens as the most important task or not,seems to be debunked due to the feasibility of other priorities as well as emergence of economic downturn in the societies which do this for its dwellers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72941176471 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.07924954086 2.80592935109 145% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.510686893 49.4020404114 295% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 292.2 106.682146367 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.0 20.7667163134 246% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.6 7.06120827912 292% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320593861267 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182138254317 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656153501623 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202759822368 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552344762888 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.1 13.0946893788 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.79 50.2224549098 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.84 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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