Most medical doctors want to work in cities where they will make a lot of money. Yet in many rural areas there are not enough doctors. What are the reasons for this problem? How can it be solved?
It is true that most newly graduated physicians prefer working in the urban area than using their talent in poorer places since big cities could offer them much more opportunities to practice their skills and make more money. This leads to the consequence that rural areas are lacking of people specialize in medical fields. This problem could be solve by changing the policies in both recruiting processes of hospitals and enrollment requirements in medical schools.
It could not be denied that working in a big city has many advantages. Firtly, urban area has the highest number of medical facilities, from primary care centers such as pharmacies or emergency departments to big and specialized hospitals. This offer a variety of choices and a higher chance of finding a job for young doctors who have just graduated from school. Furthermore, these centers often have the most innovative technologies and medicines and are capable of treating the most severe diseases when other healthcare facilities in poorer places have already given up. This could provide a better chance for physician to practice theirs skills, update the newest protocols and could easily pursue higher education.
While many doctors choose to stay in the big cities, rural areas are lacking of skilled healthcare giver. To solve this problem, firsly, local goverment should have policies to attract young students to work in local healthcare facilities by offering them high salary or financial aid for buying houses or cars. Another way to approach this problem is changing the enrollment requirements in medical university by lowing the standards for students in rural areas only if they sign the contract that makes them come back and serve their hometown after graduation.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that many doctors choose to work in the urban area for better conditions and opportunities while local hospitals do not have enough qualified physicians. Local government and medical schools could take a step in by changing their policies in recuitment to solve this problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, while, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26283987915 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67810076225 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540785498489 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5644152586 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306163396713 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112346496214 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443935269008 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198394478163 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312318459257 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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