In most parts of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. Discuss the main traffic problem in tour country and possible solution
The startling growth for commuters is a cause of widespread concern today, as so many people use modes of transport to move for developing the economy and society. There are a number of problems that people and environment suffer as a result of these rises, but also some straightforward measures we can take to protect ourselves. The following essay will support my opinion with additional information.
Perhaps the worst problem stemming from this is the traffic snarl-up. It occurs when a volume of traffic generates demand for space greater than the available infrastructure capacity. For example, roads in my city are outdated design and inappropriate traffic mix, leading gridlock, especially in peak time if the volume of traffic has risen tremendously. A further problem is that this growth has a pessimistic consequence on air quality. Motorbikes, dominate vehicle in my country, are non-renewable source consumption and carbon dioxide emissions which contribute to climate change and global warming. Finally, there is the problem of health caused to the vehicle users of vehicle abuse. The incidence of asthma and lung cancer has increased because of inhaling the exhaust fumes released by means of transport on the road.
Turning to possible solutions, probably the most effective measure is to limit the number of vehicles allowed. For instance, Singapore is to cap these quantities on its streets and harder to approval from the government to buy new cars. Secondly, we should raise awareness about using public transport among citizens via publicity and public education. Ultimately, the electric means of transport and biofuel should be prioritized. The government should implement a price control to these which may spur people to change their behavior.
Overall, the problems caused are both transportation, environment and physical effects, and the solutions should involve coordinated action by individuals and the state.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47840531561 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97057158432 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624584717608 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0951433714 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126740579194 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384920180263 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477950986172 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645654730401 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541630495371 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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