Most people do not care enough about environmental issues.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Due to latest advancements in technology environment has suffered a lot. Majority of the people are negligent to the environmental concerns that the world is facing today. I completely agree with this opinion and think that if this negligence continues in future also then it can have major consequences for the mankind.
Firstly, the main reason why people are so careless about the environment is they do not see any direct harm or impact that they are causing to the environment due to their day to day activities. The damage is not happening in front of their eyes. Take an example of the ice melting in North pole and South pole, most of the people don’t know and even care how it is going to affect their life somehow. Because the changes happening in the nature are so slow, which makes people think it is not even happening. So, the first step to save the mother Earth would be to make people aware about its current devastating state and how they are going to be affected by it.
Secondly, Humans are really selfish, they can go to any extent in destroying the nature just to make their own life easy and comfortable. Also, the continuous battle going on between different countries regarding the technical advancements leads to further suffering of the environment. For instance, nuclear weapons are a major threat to the whole planet which includes humans as well, but still countries are in continuous war to develop these weapons. With each passing year, more and more countries are developing nuclear weapons and that day is not far when nuclear war between countries will commence and will mark the end of life on Earth. Thus, all countries should come together and should take some concrete measures to stop ruining the nature once and for all.
In conclusion, I think people’s carelessness and selfishness is the main reason for the current environmental issues that we are facing. However, we still have time to amend our deeds if we start thinking about saving the nature from the very moment itself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
Due to latest advancements in technology environment ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83045977011 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59868477715 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557471264368 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6548257732 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.066666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139723851274 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414088925245 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402072828736 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763065351388 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390672871274 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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