Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional and religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional and religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some argue that the main reasons some traditional and religious festivals have been holding are forgotten in modern world and people are interested in spending their time while enjoying. I believe that these events are considered as celebrations and the background are coming forget in society.

On the one hand, these days there are festival period in the world. Local people take part in some traditional or religious celebrations. the underlying means of important festival make spread to new generation while grandparent tell some stories with religious content that make children aware of festivals which take place. In school, also pupils learn adequate information about traditional festivals in details. For example, they memorize the religious songs which describe the festival definitely. It is the fact that playing theaters and singing in festivals play a significant role in passing customs to next generation clearly. For example, Muslim people associate in religious occasion every year to respect their killed leaders.

On the other hand, traditional and religious functions have been forgetting and these occasions are become times for celebration. Christmas is a good example of a festival when people become terrible hectic in order to make purchase presents for families and relatives, receive awesome gifts, prepare a traditional meal instead of practicing religion. I believe that these behavior can be seen in every festival period in the world. It is a fact that a large number of staff treat these periods as a holiday and travel to a far off destination. Meanwhile, we are more likely to have a perfect time and recharge our batteries for a year ahead and thinking about the exact concept of some occasions has not a place in mind while we all suffer from the high level of stress.

To conclusion, although some people are aware of the reasons of festivals, I argue that they want to enjoy themselves during celebrations as critical goal.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'periods'?
Suggestion: periods
...one hand, these days there are festival period in the world. Local people take part in...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... traditional or religious celebrations. the underlying means of important festival ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e underlying means of important festival make spread to new generation while gran...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eople become terrible hectic in order to make purchase presents for families and ...
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Line 7, column 370, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this behavior' or 'these behaviors'?
Suggestion: this behavior; these behaviors
... of practicing religion. I believe that these behavior can be seen in every festival period in...
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Line 7, column 454, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... period in the world. It is a fact that a large number of staff treat these periods as a holiday ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23659305994 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77928543861 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552050473186 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8272343679 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206008936528 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069799041169 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525684961382 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136093319681 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032952346878 0.056905535591 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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