As most people spend major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.
What factors contribute to job satisfaction?
How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Recently, the phenomenon of being satisfactory at work and its corresponding impacts have sparked a long-running dispute. In this regard, the most important factor of wellbeing is job satisfaction because adults spend their major part of time at work. In my view, such elements as financial matters and workplace play a crucial role in job satisfaction.
Obviously, the first and most significant factor, in almost any vocation offer, is money. Loads of people, perhaps all of them, struggle to earn more and more income, while they work in various companies, whether small-scale or colossal international ones, or even as self-employed. Moreover, financial incentives, for example, promotions and remunerations, pave the way for being more satisfied at their work, and so lead to dramatic climb of welfare.
In addition, physical conditions of workplace should be taken into account as another major contribution. Providing facilities as simple as better air conditioning system by which employees don’t feel stuffy, may elevate workers’ gratification. According to miscellaneous findings of researchers, color of offices’ walls causes to spread happiness amongst employees. Consequently, it is likely that such basic physical considerations about workplace enhance workers’ creativity and they would come up with innovative ideas.
On the other hand, the expectations of workers and job satisfaction should be consistent and it depends on circumstances under which employees are doing their best to achieve targets. In developed regions such as US or European nations, we witness a subtle balance between expectations and true content, thanks to strict rules which were developed between employees and employers, whereas in developing countries like Iran, expectation levels as fairly low as paying salaries on time.
To conclude, despite compelling arguments on causes and effects of job satisfaction factors, I am inclined to believe that financial elements as well as physical status of workplace come first. By the way, some individuals are of the opinion that money is not everything.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, by the way, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45741324921 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06181931757 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630914826498 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 317.0 20.2975951904 1562% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1730.0 106.682146367 1622% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 317.0 20.7667163134 1526% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 159.0 7.06120827912 2252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324780435685 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.324780435685 0.084324248473 385% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162481330577 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115793981393 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 162.8 13.0946893788 1243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -258.74 50.2224549098 -515% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 128.1 11.3001002004 1134% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.87 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.29 8.58950901804 283% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 128.8 10.1190380762 1273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 129.0 10.7795591182 1197% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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