Most people think about creating an ideal society, but most of the time fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?
Granted, many great philosophers have come up with what an ideal society should comprise and how we can achieve it, but our contemporary society is far from ideal since countless problems still permeate our every aspect of life. As far as I am concerned, an ideal society has to do with several fundamental factors including but not restricted to people’s freedom, and well-being; hence, it is extremely problematic to create one due to the conflicting and personal nature of each of the aforementioned elements.
A milieu in which everyone could have the autonomy to do what they wish, achieve high levels of happiness and is well catered for should be considered ideal. With regard to freedom, it is unanimously agreed that being stripped off of the freedom of choice, speech, or expression, one can hardly find an environment worth living. As for people’s well-being, this abstract concept is difficult to define due to its personal nature: one may achieve a high level of satisfaction without many material possessions; one may feel so depressed or helpless that he commits suicide, even though he may have an unimaginable amount of wealth.
It would be nigh on impossible to create an ideal society where everyone is happy and well and free to do what they like. To look for a supporting example, one need look no further than smoking. Certainly, imposing a ban on such a so-called self-destructive habit would indeed force smokers to quit, but, at the same time, it would also violate their freedom of choice. Perhaps, a step that would go a long way in forming an ideal society would be to educate people to believe in certain sets of beliefs, and values. Nevertheless, such an ideological indoctrination would result in the loss of critical thinking, which plays a vital role in the progression of any society.
In conclusion, an ideal society is undoubtedly desirable and consisted of many different elements, but it is futile, or to be more exact, unrealistic to try to achieve one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, still, well, as for, as to, in conclusion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97916666667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99366299716 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592261904762 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.7070885643 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.090909091 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5454545455 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299840242717 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117947004491 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845768113764 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190034128952 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070012768486 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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