Most schools offer some type of physical education program to their students. Is physical education important in the 21st century? Should physical education classes be required or optional?
Historically, physical education plays a crucial role in curriculum of many educational policies in countries. While the sedentary lifestyle has been more popular these days, it is critical to keep this instruction program in schools and universities. This essay will explain some possible reasons for the favor view of the physical program’s importance in the 21st century.
First and foremost, I believe that physical activities which have been included in educational program are essential for promoting student health. In fact, the lifestyle that involves less physical activities happens more in this crowded society. Consequently, this leads to a vast range of dangerous health problems, such as obesity in children. Because of these problems, doing exercise is the method which can assist students to combat the issues. It not only helps students feel more entertained, but also makes our body become healthier and stronger. Another thing, people and learners can be taught and understood more about the method, then they can apply it into their lives and done by themselves, and they can lead a better lives.
According to doing exercise’s benefits, physical training classes should be kept as a mandatory requirement in schools’ and universities’ curriculum. As a matter of any fact, many individuals still believe that this type of education in curriculum is not important and it even wastes time. Many prestigious scientists, however, have pointed out many beneficial aspects of the program. The fulfilled development of students, for example, which is resulted from a balanced studying program between physical activities and other basic knowledge. Additionally, the physical programs in schools can also create opportunities to encourage people expressing their different abilities, for instance, the sports competence will be represented just when playing game or participating competitive sports. After all, educators and students should advocate policymakers to keep the physical education as a permanent and compulsory subject in educational strategy of every school and university.
All in all, physical activities are extremely important to promote students’ and people’s health when many harmful kinds of lifestyle has been becoming tendencies in this world. Therefore, the physical training in learning programs should be considered as a requirement in every educational environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, while, after all, another thing, for example, for instance, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77777777778 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20350887868 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580555555556 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1351893909 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.352941176 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396751801587 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126881877094 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110046880786 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262817259664 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101428515996 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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