In most successful organizations, some people believe that communication between managers and workers is important, while other people said that other factors are more significant. What is your opinion?
it is undoubtedly the case that communication in the workplace plays an important role, especially this between bosses and staff. In my opinion, apart from communication, I believe that other factors in the workplace are significant as well.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why communication is one of the most important keys to success in well-organized companies. Firstly, it acts as a vital tool that effects directly on working efficiency. To what a certain extent, the details and clearance of ideas and missions that are delivered from leaders to his team depends on the way he represents them. A mission only can be well carried out when it is transferred and got the point in the right way. Secondly, beyond the working scale, the relationship between bosses and staff can be better if they get more friendly conservations. this helps leaders understand more about the hobbies, the strength, and the weakness of their co-workers. through this understanding, they can assign jobs that suit the ability of each person in their team
On the other hand, other factors in companies also have a significant role such as working environment and rules. A young and dynamic working environment with cutting-edge technologies will make employees comfortable and encouraged, therefore, they will have good performances. In successful organizations, rule sometimes is a determining factor because, through it, people have to take responsibility for their jobs.
In conclusion, there are many elements contributing to the success of a good organization. Although communication is a vital factor, I believe that other factor also has a certain contribution to the great development of companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, apart from, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3037037037 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24585628 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8962960684 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.153846154 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272084038577 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814120891613 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740230207655 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157276946502 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408071452583 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.