In this fast-growing era, we are witness to a population explosion, though the excess of anything impacting negatively to us. higher population further degrades the environment even causing water scarcity in the future, however, there are many more negative aspects of overcrowd. In this essay, I will discuss both measure problems and their solutions. I completely agree that overpopulation is the main issue in front of the world.
Certainly, as the population growing tremendously affecting the environment badly, every family becoming nuclear after a point of time, then they need separate shelter which requires lend and require more infrastructure so people using trees, the data shows that in metropolitan cities there is 45 percent increase in the tree cutting, therefore the huge loss of environment and it's affecting the fauna and flora, so the solution to apply stringent population, the traditional method of living in joint family and the most important the vertical building which are using less space.
Secondly, water depletion there are so many areas which are affected by this problem even for drinking, as the growth of population, increasing day by day the need of water increasing but water resources are less and there are many advancements to use seawater for other purposes, so that the chronic water problem to the many areas, to curb this situation first we need to aware people about contraception and the negative aspect of more than two child, how to reuse water, how to harvest rainwater by changing the infrastructure we can utilize the wastewater these are some solution to deter this water shortage.
In my opinion, the population explosion in recent decades causing so many problems and people have to aware of these negative impacts and government should need to launch some schemes for small families so that the mind perspective of many others will change towards this because population growth is the main reason for many problems.
In conclusion, there is so much negative impact on the environment, ozone depletion, water scarcity, depletion in the fertility of the soil these are all because of the overpopulation, there are many solutions and everyone have to think about these. the government should need to be manage this problem otherwise it becomes very dangerous.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 449, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'child' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'children'.
Suggestion: children
...nd the negative aspect of more than two child, how to reuse water, how to harvest rai...
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Line 9, column 251, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...and everyone have to think about these. the government should need to be manage thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25537634409 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8444810893 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529569892473 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 200.435636663 49.4020404114 406% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.222222222 106.682146367 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.3333333333 20.7667163134 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0819141543095 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515715818332 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631888506541 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0504450994057 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412952265757 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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