Many people charge admission fees while others are free. Do the advantages of charging people to visit a museum outweigh the disadvantages?
Museums are a source of great knowledge about the past, different artifacts, and other types, So, A visit to a museum is undoubtedly one of the most interesting ways to delve in to and discover the history, however, in some countries, there are entry fees for a visit despite that some are free. In this essay, I will discuss both the views and their negative and positive sides although in my opinion museum should be chargeable so that overcrowding should be avoided.
Firstly, charges during entry deter the overcrowding and only those people will come who are interested to gain something from the museum, Secondly, the collection of money should be used for maintaining the museum, for renovation and cleaning. So, the charges are important to the overall development of the museum. Although funding is required to maintain valuable items as well to assign duty staff and hence this is the only source of collecting money. For example in the UK there are many museums is closed due to the UK banned the funding.
Second, if we are analyzing the flip side of the coin there are negative aspects, First, the resident people they discouraged with this point, and only tourists will visit and that will also deter the interest of the people in artifacts. Second, if it's free more people visit there and may damage the expensive things and it is very tough to handle overcrowd and may tourist lose interest. A huge slash in funding affects the museum's development.
In conclusion, charging fees are advantageous while without fees it will cause lots of drawbacks, So, in my opinion, minimal funding should be applied at the entry-level so that only genuine people visit,
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also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91549295775 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60649015239 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.1196426686 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.6 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280806453486 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105956274673 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678402774759 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16989640354 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407680735418 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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