Mothers play key roles in upbringing of children. But in the recent times both parents are getting busy with professional life. Who in your opinion should take care of the responsibility of children care now? Give your opinion.
In the global era which is also acknowledge as emancipation era, the number of women workers in various regions had grown significantly. In the European darkness era, women should be banned for active and engaging in public services. Moreover, women were positioned as housewife who take a role for upgbringin the child. In the positive way, the openness of opportunity for women to active in various job sectors. However, there are negative way that if the women should not manage their time between home and office, the women potentially to abandon their child as well as household.
In general, both of men and women are having their respective responsibilities to their child. Therefore, ideally all of them should upbringing the child. Although they have different kinds of responsibility among them, such as men should take responsibility a bunch to completing child necessaries which is related to the facility of child. On the other hand, women would take the priority for managing household as well as upbringing the child whereas are related to excogitate social cohesiveness.
Referring to argumentation above, women are the prominent person who take extra time for keeping child care. The data from anne Arent, the psychologist of Oxford University portrayed that most of child in the world tend to closer to their moms then father. Furthermore, anne stated, child have a deepening feeling to their moms then the other.
In conclusion, women workers whose have child should be balanced their time between work and family which especially for child.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'acknowledged'.
Suggestion: acknowledged
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Suggestion: Aren't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, in conclusion, in general, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23015873016 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86023862266 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543650793651 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7210820895 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.384615385 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0908270740125 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042375582071 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375768020969 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602526782885 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204037147869 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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