Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there

Centuries ago the use of motorways was not in existence, rather people travel by animals and they work a very long distance in other to get to their destination. Motorways has made life easier for humans, in terms of transportation to work, school, business, and office. Despite this easy way of transportation we are still face with difficult motorways problem making it difficult to consider the use of motorways. because of these problems associated with motorways transport, some think is not staff to travel by motorways.
Today some of the problems associated with motorways are air pollution, constantly inhaling the smoke that comes out of a moving car or truck can cause humans to fall ill, and this can have significant effect on their respiratory system for a long period of time. In other to prevent this problem the federal and state government can implement a law to guild all car drivers as to constant car maintenance or face fine.
Beside, another issue with motorways is constant road accident. Many drivers today always drive above the required speed limit set out at every road. Drivers are forgetting that they are not the only road users, but also school children, parent and grandparent. If drivers continue to ignore speed sign and drive above the require speed limit set out on each road the rate of death by accident will continue to increase drastically.
However to prevent increase in road accident the government can set a law that offenders will not be able to avoid in other for them to pay for any crime they have committed. if possible they can stay behind bars for life. this will serve as a warning to other road users if they ever commit any traffic offences.
In conclusion, motorways have made life easier for humans in terms of traveling long distance and short distance making life beautiful. though is has also cause sickness and death to some families as a result of careless drivers. But the federal and state government can implement a law that will make sure that offenders of traffic laws never go unpunished.

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Average: 8.1 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, as to, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88319088319 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62086584016 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504273504274 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3697267711 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.125 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200875206104 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715765399716 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619004129268 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111493132669 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693613319237 0.056905535591 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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