Music is played in every society and culture in the world today Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies Others however think that music can have a negative influence on both Discuss both views and give your own opini
We can not imagine our life and society without music because every nation has their own national music. Some people think music has benefits to individuals and societies while other against this. There are arguments on both sides of this very topical debate, and I will discuss them now.
On the one hand, opponents of music point to loud music has bad influence on ear. Some youngsters used to headphones in a loud sound, even they get in their ear. Secondly, someone who listening to music in a work time, they not able to collect their opinion. It can reduce efficiency of work, even this cause some terrible disasters. Finally, there is a spending a lot of valuable time for listening music. Some fans if music try to go concerts instead of work and spend to this 2 or 3 days.
On the other hand, supporters of music say music is a art and it gives relaxing time, some feelings. They enjoy music when they listen it live or form TV or another device. Furthermore, music can help save the national cultures so it is sounded annual ceremony or other celebrations. Every time athletics or other participants of competition win then national hymn sounds. Finally, sometimes it help to relax when worker very tired. Workers of office hear a music when there are lots of noise.
In conclusion, my own feeling is that music is good thing for our mind and national music is our property. But we listen it over the norm it influence our mind and efficiency
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62548262548 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47476794454 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.4193964041 49.4020404114 31% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.4705882353 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360772180217 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117093892689 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966927269262 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224111103187 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105835142981 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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