n today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that the demand for professional qualification will decline gradually as nowadays most of the job prefers practical knowledge than the theoretical knowledge. However, I personally disagree with this statement and believe that educational qualification is as important as experience for some reasons that I will discuss further.
It is true that the employers are in search of individuals who are having at least a year of experience in corresponding fields. But it does not mean that the recruiters are only focusing on practical side as they search for people who are qualified too. For instance, even the person who works in cleaning and labouring department should have some basic level of education to promote themselves to the next level of employment. Therefore, it cannot be said that practical knowledge is enough to get a job.
Besides, the modern world is demanding highly qualified professionals to work for their companies and it is important for the individual to get a fair incentive for a good standard of living. The experienced persons may get some considerations to be in a job but to hold a degree is also must for applying a job. Even more, the increasing number of students who enrol for a tertiary education worldwide clearly states that theory is necessary to get a job. Hence, it can be said that both knowledge is essential for a well settled life and the trend will continue in the future too.
In conclusion, even though experience can sometimes give a perfect employee, I personally believe that both knowledge is indispensable and co-related each other and it will continue in the upcoming years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, at least, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05860805861 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0333828527 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8304086192 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.545454545 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120751290474 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541151583845 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506322486516 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0727224237313 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479203645074 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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