News plays an important part of most people's lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?
In the words of one of the prominent scientists of our history Albert Einstein, for the current generation, the news constitutes an essential part of life. It is obvious that news clearly occupies a vital role in our society for it is the only means to notify the public of the latest warnings and incidents, and I am convinced that the news should highlight good news devoted to the illustration of people's joy more than bad news dedicated to criticism of the administration.
Obviously, I understand that the news remains a crucial part of our life because only through the news citizens can learn about recent affairs in the world, especially warning of danger. In other words, the broadcast is the only way to prevent people from public threats like terrorist attacks and contagious diseases. For example, in 2018, the meningococcal disease began to spread in Almaty, and due to the fact that the public was forestalled by the news to undertake safety measures, the city could avoid the outbreak of the disease. Undoubtedly, such announcements make our lives safer and more comfortable, and therefore it seems to me that the news plays a substantial role in our community.
Nowadays, clearly, approximately 80 percent of the news is dedicated to bad news criticizing the administration. To explain, journalists show more bad news to indicate the government the issues confronted by the public. For instance, in 2015, 100 dilapidated buildings in Astana were renovated only after they were reported in the news. Therefore, I suppose that reporters are struggling with the main problems of citizens by broadcasting more bad news. On the other hand, the excess of bad news has its drawbacks, so I am certain that the news should focus more on the positive news rather than negative. To put it another way, the overabundance of bad news causes terror among residents and suspends the activity of the country. For example, in 2012, the half of Astana civilians halted going to work since they were afraid of terrorist attacks reported in the news. Consequently, Astana's revenues have declined three times during this year. All in all, I understand that immoderate amount of bad news has its own downsides and should be succeeded by the good news.
On the whole, I think the news serves a dominant role in our life because it is the most effective way of prevention of crimes and diseases. I suppose the purpose of the superfluity of the bad news is to show the government the public issues. However, in my opinion, the news should announce more positive news rather than negative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, therefore, as for, for example, for instance, i suppose, i think, in my opinion, in other words, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94724770642 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84923596225 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497706422018 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5647480375 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.509189997228 0.244688304435 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183749623992 0.084324248473 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110174695776 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343051883194 0.151304729494 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788486534749 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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