News plays an important part of most people’s lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?
Information is the new currency in this globalised era; hence accessing news easily is of prime significance to everyone. This fast paced generation has also lead to, opening of new horizons leading to many fearing the unknown. This in-turn helps bad news spread like wild-fire. Such scenarios have made many, myself included, to believe that a shift in focus towards good news is the need of the hour.
Connectivity has improved by leaps and bound nowadays, leading to increase in changes that affect peoples’ daily routine. This has made availability of information at the right time crucial. An example of this is the rapid policy changes taking place in the Indian financial markets that have created havoc for companies, as they are required to react quickly in order to be legally compliant. The way society reacts to news is the leading cause of the parabolic spread of negative media attention. Humans are more fearful than hopeful by nature; and this knowledge is used by content creators, to focus their attention on stories and events that would spread fast. Reports of rape, domestic violence, terrorism and drug addiction not only spread quickly, but also create a sense of fear in the society.
Although, this is the prevailing condition, changing our focus towards positive news will help us progress as a global society. There are so many minor achievements taking place every single day in every part of this planet, which are just not being heard. Providing a voice and audience for such feats will raise the hope in humanity. Moreover, this will aid in creating an energetic and purpose driven society.
In conclusion, even though we have been accustomed to consume and propagate negative information we can and should shift our focus on more positive developments as that will truly guide us towards the greater good.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'leaded', 'led'.
Suggestion: leaded; led
...ne. This fast paced generation has also lead to, opening of new horizons leading to ...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to consuming'.
Suggestion: accustomed to consuming
...In conclusion, even though we have been accustomed to consume and propagate negative information we c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07868852459 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60873195197 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609836065574 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.622366091 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.266666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179680075773 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616903713381 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643170510777 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105270233155 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603416153784 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.