Some people think that zoos are cruel and that all zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Should animals be held captive in zoos is often debatable? While some think that it can help in conserving endangered wild life, some, like me, believe that it is cruel.
On the one hand, while animals are well suited to their natural habitat, there are some that believe keeping them in a controlled environment like a zoo, could help preserve their species. Firstly, animals can be monitored and controlled in a cage thereby increasing their chances of survival. To illustrate, a rare species of monkey kept in a zoo can reproduce and multiply faster as they won’t be infected by diseases or hunted down by predators. Secondly, zoos can provide data about a particular animal near extinction and provide solutions to save them. For instance, Asiatic lions are nearing extinction and data provided by Indian zoos that studied them has helped authorities figure out ways to save those lions. Therefore, zoos might offer a way of protecting animals and increase their survival rate by studying them.
On the other hand, capturing animals is against their natural habitat and isn’t helpful. Confining animals to an enclosure induces unnecessary stress in them resulting in an unhealthy growth. For example, white tigers brought in zoos from the wild find it extremely difficult to adapt to their new surroundings and often die due to being in a restricted space. Moreover, if a counter argument is made like, subjecting humans to confinement one might instantly find it immoral and offensive. Being not empathetic to other creatures and showing empathy to only humans is unjust. Lastly, humans should co-exist with other life on the Earth and not try to coerce them. Hence, subjecting animals to cages is often stressful and unnatural to them and we must live on this planet together in harmony.
In conclusion, according to me, zoos might be a way to save animals, but they do more harm than good, hence, all zoos should be closed down. Letting animals live their life is the way of nature and we shouldn’t try to alter it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...a zoo can reproduce and multiply faster as they won't be infected by diseases...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00879765396 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66763218418 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574780058651 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7565064855 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.470588235 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232454791283 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764534588659 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661037289474 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164542330872 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051571990868 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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