Newspapers and magazines will not be available in the near future because large amounts of information from the internet will replace them. Do you agree or disagree? Give some examples from your own experience.
It is widely held believe that paper media will disappear in the next decades and websites and online magazines will be in the trend, but there is strong counter argument from amongst sections of people that do not agree with this argument. However, I am of the opinion that this matter to be debated in the light of several factors before any conclusion can be drawn.
First of all, nowadays, young generation tend to surf on the internet and prefer read all news and eye-catching contents online. One the other hand, we can see elder people who read large newspapers and glans magazines in the city park. Undoubtedly, internet is efficient tool for society where people are able to find out all informations with one click. As a matter of fact, internet resources have more impact for users that the paper. For instance, reader is able to watch video, photo and read article related worldwide event such as presidential election and sport tournament. In my opinion, it is better to have video and more photo gallery on the one page. In the newspaper readers can one or two photo and video is impossible. As a reader, I prefer websites in order to have more and full information with multimedia contents such as video report and face-to-face audio interview. Moreover, we are able to write comments and share most viewed or commented content.
Secondly, newspaper and magazines have their own advantages since during the my childhood we can not know what is internet or wi-fi. Therefore paper was the brilliant treasure and main information source for society members. It seems ridiculous, I sometimes ache for read magazine or newspaper just for feel paper smell and remember my school time. Also our care givers and parents are not able to surf in the internet and newspaper saves its necessity in the society. For example, my father and mother, who 56 and 58 respectively, usually buy daily newspaper and weekly magazines links that internet is strange toll for them.
To sum up, although there are a number of different points of view regarding this issue, I claim that both, internet and newspaper/magazine, should be alive in the society since there are older generation who prefer paper and young people that put the online resources in the first place. Moreover, in my view, editorial will not interfere readers preference and honor both groups choice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...aper smell and remember my school time. Also our care givers and parents are not abl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, as a matter of fact, first of all, in my opinion, in my view, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9275 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64612806757 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9273917434 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167075906638 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486607072658 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442453449071 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10548400508 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470966656243 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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